This is a story I'm currently in the process of writing. I realize it it ...ahem... a bit lengthy, so if you make it through in one sitting, I thank you and give you props. If you could please let me know what was good and what wasn't, that would be very helpful. I'm in the process of writing Chapter 6. Thank you so much.
P.S. If you see the name 'Adam' anywhere, could you tell me? I had originally had the main characters name as Adam, but then decided to change it to Felix. Thanks… Continue